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Breathe while it's still clean,
your mind has gone to bed with your heart
and now you're beginning to sink. It's such
a lovely thing to be alive

You're just like a snow flake
that's melted and joined the other drops of water
in the
sea.

You know I never claimed to be
different from
the rest of them, I just said I'm not
one to judge the others.

explicit thoughts occurring, now
censored for your viewing displeasure its
not your body so
why should you care what I want to do with it

Finally an ending that's real
none of this downer or happy bull crap
If there is an end, it's neutral and equal
cause the end is death,and beyond that who the fuck knows?
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Author's Comments

Another poem, in a sort of free verse type style.

Don't pause at the end of each line all the time. Follow the crappy punctuation or lack thereof. Or don't. Whatever makes it sound better to you.

And read it out loud. (=

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The poem feels divided. Like someone forgot what they were talking about and jumped to another thought. It's interesting, though.

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