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I. The End of You by ~stevenpinhead:iconstevenpinhead:



I

The earth looks green from space,
and now it's going to turn red.
With all its
war
blood
cash
gods
demons.

The truth is
you were never
clean, and now your mask
has melted away.
Don't ask me where to go,
my answer will be the same as it ever was

We fought your battles,
and we'll watch you die
alone.
You'll never get to see
the ends of what
you've done.

There's a beginning
in the end, and now
the end has come to pass.
A voice unheard will shout out now
and its tone is scarred and beat

We fought your battles,
and we'll watch you die
alone.
You'll never get to see
the ends of what
you've done.

Your ship is sunk in a sea of blood
and the floor is cold. Now you'll
drown in your own waste.
Make your peace now because
your hell will drag you

We fought your battles,
and we'll watch you die
alone.
You'll never get to see
the ends of what
you've done.
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Author's Comments

An idea I've been kicking around. Written with a lyrical mindset.

Based on a little story idea I had a while ago.

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:icong-r-o-w-l-z:
Interesting. For whatever reason, Bush popped into my head while I was reading this. I imagine it would be fun to sing. ;p

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I'm sure you know what this is.
:iconstevenpinhead:
I think I might write out the story proper, so I won't spoil anything.

I didn't have Bush in particular in mind, just an abstract authority figure. What Bush, or any president, could have/could become, let's say.
:icong-r-o-w-l-z:
Alrighty then. I'll be interested to read if you do write it out.

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I'm sure you know what this is.
:iconstevenpinhead:
We'll see how it goes if I try to write a draft or something.
:icong-r-o-w-l-z:
One penny that you never write it. ;p

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:iconstevenpinhead:
I only make bets I know I'm gonna win ;)
:icong-r-o-w-l-z:
Hmm. So that means I won't get a penny from you? :C

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